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My friend wants me to bare All that's contained within__nude Emotions covered for at least a decade__maybe more He wants emotions to protrude Like a compound fracture of the femur Bone sticking out__ghastly How could anyone want that Horror pouring out for them to see Must be a little mixed up themselves Or maybe they like the gorey side of life Where all is drama__a real bad scene No__that is not for me__no can't be

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Date: 11/7/2010 3:51:00 PM
nice piece sara thank you duncan
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:36:00 PM
has he seen it ? maybe it's worth looking at. john
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:29:00 AM
Nice form of write,, very appealing poem,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 8/2/2010 12:42:00 PM
don't knock it,there's plenty of people who would pay good money to see that.
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Date: 8/2/2010 7:35:00 AM
Very interesting Quatrain Sara >> James
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Date: 8/1/2010 12:26:00 AM
interesting poem ..... as in this life quoted : Where all is drama__a real bad scene last verse conclude it :)
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Date: 7/31/2010 6:10:00 PM
and it doesnt have to be you, Sara(: ~Always
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Date: 7/30/2010 11:01:00 PM
YOU SAID IT SARA , -'THE GORY SIDE OF LIFE WHERE ALL IS A DRAMA!' - A MATURED RENDERING FROM A MATURE POET ! (And thanks for your kind comments !) -RAJ
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:43:00 PM
enjoyed reading...who is this fiend?
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:25:00 PM
very intresting write enjoyed sara x sarah x
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:20:00 PM
A really different write for u Sara most creative and wonderful words used to express and rhyme.. enjoyed this Friday night.. with luv..
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