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Nov.1,2007

In this pitch black forest With only the full moon to light your way You stop And silence A Silence so profound You can hear the tear roll down your cheek The utter solitude you feel at this moment Overwhelms you with such force Crashing you at all sides It slows your breathing Til you barely breathe at all A wind picks up Rustles your hair Impending feeling of being alone And finally feel.....

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Date: 10/11/2008 5:40:00 AM
There's something very horrifying with this write. Ah it caught me like anything:) Loved to read it. Great imagery in between. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/11/2008 3:45:00 AM
I love the tension and suspense that travels through this piece. Great stuff.
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