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Nothing More! Nothing Less!

Cool monsoon evening Tender cold breeze! Still dark clouds on the western horizon In the back drop of the factory chimney And the crest of the church and temple! In a perfect silhouette! Chirping home bound birds Bleating goats on the mud hills The whistling passing train at a distance! Occasional cold swirling winds Beats the window shutters and Brings The odor of pollens and petals of flowers And burning smell of rubber scrap! The plunged darkness behind me Added perfect contrast Of the vivid nature outside! The prolonged silence in the ambience And the loneliness in my life; Making my mood to swing to the nature With no friend or foe around me Except the hot cup of tea beside me! I just slide on the window shutter Seeing GOD everywhere! But resigned my self to my loneliness! yet; With content in life; For what I had I have And be; Deriving every pleasure From every whisper and fragrance Passing through the window! Fleeting my ears and cheeks! Drop of showers Trickling my hands! Praying GOD To upkeep this Just ambience For ever till me! Nothing more Nothing less krishna Baalu

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Date: 12/16/2010 1:02:00 AM
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:33:00 AM
Thanks friends one and all thank you very much for your support and kudos!
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on your feature Krishna... filled with great imagery...Lay
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Krishna Baalu
Date: 1/20/2012 12:30:00 AM
Hi Thanks!
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Krishna Baalu
Date: 1/20/2012 12:30:00 AM
Hi Thanks!
Date: 12/14/2010 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Krishna. Love, Carol
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Krishna Baalu
Date: 1/20/2012 12:29:00 AM
Hi Thanks!
Date: 11/6/2010 9:42:00 AM
well done excellent write here
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Krishna Baalu
Date: 1/20/2012 12:29:00 AM
Hi Thanks!
Date: 10/18/2010 1:15:00 PM
You did a fabulous job at description in the beginning of the poem, I felt I was seeing it through your eyes! Thanks for the trip.Regards, Priscilla
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Krishna Baalu
Date: 1/20/2012 12:29:00 AM
Hi thanks!

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