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I see for myself and there's nothing, nothing but an empty shattered mirror, There's no reflection, nothing. As I turn to see my surroundings, there's nothing. Nothing, but a white room with a shattered mirror, I stand alone looking in every direction, but there's nothing, Nothing at all except me and the mirror, I stare at it once more and I see nothing, There is no night or day, nor are you hungry nor tired. There's nothing. I look at myself and I have no shadow, I have nothing, I scream, yell and cry and nothing, I have no voice, I was nothing, I looked at the mirror again and I finally knew what it was, I no longer exist, I felt nothing, For I was dead...... by: Kathleen Tovar

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Date: 3/31/2016 7:32:00 PM
Kathleen Tovar, nice to see this one again, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/31/2016 12:32:00 PM
Everything Silent and Poet said,couldn't have said it better
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Date: 3/31/2016 12:46:00 AM
Kathleen T.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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