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Not Yet Time

I drift slowly,walking through the garden of bliss down stream, "Go back son!,it`s not yet time" shouted a voice from the supreme. CONTEST:"Time-single rhyming couplet" sponsored by Black-eyed Susan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/12/2012 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem,Olusegun.Congratulations on your great win!
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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Date: 9/6/2012 3:18:00 PM
This is such a deserved win. BIG congrats on your win with this gem.
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Date: 9/6/2012 11:47:00 AM
I love your unique couplet, Olusegun! Wonderful thoughts...congrats...:))
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:27:00 PM
OLUSEGUN, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:32:00 PM
I like this, Olusegun! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 10:25:00 PM
an arresting piece from your poetic cache, olu...congrats with huggs! :)
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win Arowolo! Nice write!
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Date: 9/4/2012 10:17:00 AM
Like this, well done Olusegun xx
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Date: 8/30/2012 4:38:00 PM
Very nice! Terry
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:43:00 PM
wow, amazing!! so profound.
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