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Not That Great

But, what if I am not as great as you say? What if I can’t turn the grey sky into a beautiful blue? What if I can’t make the ocean waves turn? Or paint the sky with stars and hang up the night’s moon? What if I can’t make the sun emit vibrant lights? Or turn the neverending darkness into a glowing light? What if I am not as great as you claim? What if all I can do is step on the ground and turn green grass into something dead and brown? You say I look at broken things like I can make them new but really baby, there is nothing I can do. You say you admire me, but I know soon you’ll get tired of me; you will look at me in the eyes and say “You aren’t as great as they claim.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/9/2016 11:15:00 PM
Lluvia Gomez, nice to see this one again. SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2015 7:18:00 PM
Lluvia, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:32:00 PM
Lluvia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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