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Not My Gun Friend

Gun crime’s been round for a very long time growing up in a community seeing friends die There wasn't really anything that I could do It was a part of life I had to live through The effects it had, the damage it done Made me grow up, leave my community and run No matter where I chose to go This gun crime culture was out of control Young, middle aged, even the old Lives are taken it seems so cold This so called government should take command To stop these guns enter British land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/31/2016 9:02:00 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN. SKAT
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Date: 2/16/2015 5:39:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, Doreen - A pleasure to read your first well written poem, thank you chose to share it here with us - I wish you a nice day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:48:00 PM
DOREEN, HAPPY VALENTINES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:48:00 PM
Doreen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@
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