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Not Missing Loves Beat

Not Missing Love’s Beat Not missing love’s beat . . . . Sails to you this golden bright morning rising so high Sails waving with light, joy, and such promise and hope One smile gasping breathless always for you my love As you walk with me deeply into Eden’s very paradise Dancing my heart love on that yellow brick road of dreams Dying to be with you my love forever and ever and ever Dreams inside of eternal youth with my heart pounding so Awaiting the very day to come when I stand before you Down on bended knee holding your hands warmly smiling Kissing each and every single fingertip so exquisitely I shall ask you to be forever and always with me my love You will be my Queen with dazzling jewels of an ocean wide The other heartbeat echoing as two becomes one complete Our thirst for love and passion is almost unquenchable And my very psyche is afire with excitement when we caress Sleeping at night my love brings me into your dream world Where it’s me and you and you and me together floating Through the very ether of time breathing rarefied air so Deliciously as we’re hopelessly mesmerized in true love When I awaken from our nocturnal dream trance so joyously We hold one another so lovingly and caress so warmly at once We kiss passionately and longingly in a most sublime spirit while Not missing love’s beat . . . . Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 24, 2014) (Free Verse)

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Date: 12/28/2014 1:06:00 PM
Once again just beautiful!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 5:06:00 PM
thank you kindly meg wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/28/2014 4:40:00 AM
good and inspiring poem, keep the flame dear
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 5:05:00 PM
ahmed wonderful comment thank you kindly the flames always burns bless you
Date: 12/28/2014 2:51:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem to read, well done both.....Seren
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 5:03:00 PM
seren thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/27/2014 9:50:00 PM
Passionate and romantic as always. you two make beautiful music together!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 5:02:00 PM
thank you kindly andrea dear pal for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 12/27/2014 9:14:00 PM
Very beautiful indeed!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 5:00:00 PM
sudha thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/27/2014 5:22:00 PM
Congratulation Liam and Gary on this very beautiful piece of yours being chosen as poem of the day! So well deserved!I am so very happy for you two! Enjoy the day! I wish you all the best and a very Happy New Year! God bless you always!:) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:56:00 PM
thank you dorian dear friend for the beautiful comment wishing you a happy year
Date: 12/27/2014 4:11:00 PM
Congrats liam and Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:17:00 PM
thank you so kindly tim dear pal deeply appreciated
Date: 12/27/2014 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations Liam and Gary on poem of the day. Blessings and a Happy New Year
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:13:00 PM
eve wishing you a beautiful year ahead thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you
Date: 12/27/2014 1:14:00 PM
cheers to you and gary for the POTD citation!.. huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:11:00 PM
thank you nette dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 12/27/2014 12:16:00 PM
- So beautiful Liam & Gary ............ Congrats with p.o.t.d.!!!!! - huggs // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:07:00 PM
thank you kindly dear pal sorry i am late answering bless you for the wonderful comment
Date: 12/27/2014 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations Liam and Gary on your work being chosen as poem of the day.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:05:00 PM
maurice thank you dear friend sorry i am late way behind with everything deeply appreciated pal
Date: 12/27/2014 11:21:00 AM
WOW! This is an amazing collab. A Fav!
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:13:00 AM
The boys do it again!! Way to go -- I said it before and I will say it again -- you guys rock!! Congrats on POTD
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:02:00 PM
thank you david for the dancing in the mind beautiful comment breaks a smile
Date: 12/27/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations Liam and Gary on POTD.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 4:00:00 PM
thank you brenda dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 12/27/2014 8:06:00 AM
Congrats to both of you on Poem of the Day...well done
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 3:59:00 PM
thank you kindly joseph for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/27/2014 7:12:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! You and Gary collab so well together, Liam. It's great to have such a friendship. :) Sending you both greetings. May your wishes come true in the new year.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 3:57:00 PM
my new year lol started with a bang gary got me smiling saying the leprechaun was blinded by a rainbow searching for gold ha ha i will wait for next years wishes pal as i am away behind this year thank you for the wonderful comment wishing you a great year
Date: 12/25/2014 5:56:00 PM
Liam Mate!! This one looks remote familiar -- oh yeah, it's our co-write!! Great Job working this one together. It did turn out quite well!! (Check Out "Enchanted Vision of Love So Pure" -- I did get it posted tonight based on our earlier conversation. I sent you the final word version too.) Hope Christmas was great today for you. Best Holiday Wishes Mate!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 3:50:00 PM
sorry for the late reply gary between storms networks thank you pal a warm pleasure smiles with the leprechaun
Date: 12/25/2014 4:37:00 PM
such a wonderful romantic write from two very talented poets - love the imagery - i don't want to miss the love boat:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/5/2015 3:47:00 PM
thank you jan truly beautiful comment dear friend bless you sorry for the late reply
Date: 12/25/2014 2:43:00 PM
fascinating creation from you and david, liam... sweet affection runs though this page... merry holidays to you... huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/27/2014 3:46:00 PM
nette i pray you had a beautiful christmas wishing you a happy new year thank you kindly for the wonderful comment de\ar friend
Date: 12/25/2014 12:17:00 PM
Hello Liam and Gary ! Very awesome romantic beautiful piece you both have penned here my very dear friends. I'm really in awe on how you two really put something together like this beautiful dazzling love poem here. You two never stop amazing me with your wonderful writing talents and how you make it work. You are great poets ! Your pens are golden! Very beautiful piece! I love it! A solid 7 +++ to each of you! Merry Christmas to you both! Have a great evening :) Love and hugs! xoxox D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/27/2014 2:11:00 PM
thank you kindly dorian dear pal wishing you a happy new year with festive blessings wonderful comment bless you

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