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NOT LISTENING Choral gladioli in formal circles, Standing awkward beneath the pines’ Shade - their pinks and purples Gasping in the gloom for sunshine. Immersed in a happy crowd mustered Around them - dandelions in masses Like children in unruly jostling clusters, A natural attraction - yellow dresses Dancing to the music of the breeze, Laughing and touching heads, Fast growing, well rooted - at ease: They want to be here, they‘re glad. Gladioli are ordered there in rings Dutifully participatory, Rendering songs an outsider sings In unheeding dandelion territory. ...................................................................................... Written 27 July 2014 (I wrote this when watching the formal beds of flowers in a somewhat overgrown garden in the city.)

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Date: 8/6/2014 10:29:00 PM
SIDNEY,, Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
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Date: 8/4/2014 3:01:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive, well done :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:03:00 AM
Congrats...Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:56:00 AM
I REALLY love this one. So colorful too. Congrats to you.
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:20:00 AM
Congrats on this beautiful winning write Sidney !
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:20:00 PM
Strikingly descriptive Sidney. Quite the gem...congrats Tim
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:53:00 PM
This is so delightful. What a picture you drew of the arrogant little dandelions, dancing befoe the cowed gladioli. Loved it. Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:49:00 PM
Sidney, I am going to enjoy getting to know your poetry better. I am relatively new. This is a stunning piece of verse; drew me right into the crowd of happy dandelions. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:14:00 PM
Stunning in every description! I can see it all, in glorious colors......... I'm so happy you are back, Sydney......this is a supreme example of why we have missed your poetry ! :)
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:00:00 PM
I'm sure I've told you before how much I like your poems, and I certainly like this one! it's a very polished piece, with some lovely colourful imagery - "...pinks and purples/gasping in the gloom for sunshine" is particularly striking, and I like the dandelions in their 'yellow dresses' - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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