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Not Letting Go

Small hands hold secure Not wanting to let it go. Fearful of losing What I may never obtain, You take it and I will cry. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2011 10:47:00 AM
True character of a baby Caryl, enjoyed this. Wishing you all the best for Linda's contest and thank you for your kind comments :)
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Date: 4/12/2011 7:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Caryl. I wish you the best in Linda-Marie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:22:00 AM
Nice Tanka Caryl.Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/11/2011 10:59:00 PM
awww,that is so cute, just like a baby might be thinking.
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:58:00 PM
Children are possessive of their things- "Mine, mine, mine," this little girl sings.
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:21:00 PM
Nice read of the picture in the contest, Caryl
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