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Not My Choosing !

As the age old conflict between 'destiny' and 'free will' in Philosophy continues , I decided to write this short poem reflecting my views ! -Raj Not My Choosing ! I had existed beyond time and space , In a dimension which was divine ; Till You brought me here , And said that this world was mine ! With the passing of each year , I get closer to Thee ; For it is You who brought me here , And it is You who will set me free ! I never came of my own choosing , You only decided my fate ; And placed my soul within , - This skeletal mortal frame ! Now with the approacing years , My soul yearns to be free ; For You have brought me here , It is You who shall set me free ! -Raj Nandy New Delhi.

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Date: 9/3/2010 3:48:00 AM
Yes, God knitted us together in our mother's womb..Soon we will be back with him if we chose to accept the free gift of eternal life with him through his son Jesus..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:01:00 AM
set me free....beautiful poem on being free contrasting it with ..not my choosing...Warm welcome to this site...finally you are here! and thanks for bringing to my notice my misspelt surname...regards.. Rinki.
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