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Norwegian Wood

I once had a girl or should I say she once had me. with a soul so tender it melted in your arms and warm enough to want to curl up to, she took me. and with hands cool as stone that could reach into your raw self, and shake the very roots of humanity, and to good health, she raised me. we walked as gods would, if they would breathe like us, if they could need like us and love like us. touch like us and enjoy like us, the gifts of being young like us and being merely us. the days were devoid of a sense of time, as one-track as trees growing, just up, up, up. and the nights were sweet and dark and long with cool skin on skin and hand on heart, songs to a god not there, and the art of offering all to another. how could I have known which the way the winds would have blown, and which trees would have grown had I known the earth a little better, known that seeds need to be sown and now this bird has flown, and I once had a girl or should I say she once had me.

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Date: 1/25/2016 7:24:00 PM
JACOB, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:05:00 PM
Oh so sad
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jacob. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:29:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading this poetry from The Beatles song .. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. with luv..
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Date: 11/14/2010 5:30:00 PM
interesting write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:53:00 PM
Very awesome and intriguing thoughts you have penned about you and a girl, Jacob
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