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This poem was inspired by the new form of poem introduced in the contest and another contest with a theme, Noah's Ark.

In the beginning of the world After creation has been told Noah’s story became unfold Precious as gold, precious as gold God told Noah to build an ark Since people sinned and chose the dark This earth be washed leaving no mark As rain will park, as rain will park He went in with his family Got animals in pairs only Birds by twos- obeying gladly Saved lovingly, saved lovingly Flood rose higher than the mountain Far beyond hundred days when drained Out of the ark, they ain't in vain New life again, new life again June 17, 8.55pm Form: Monotetra (This is also a try of a new form)

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/7/2013 9:29:00 AM

Good message re-told Leonora, it challenges the mind how all this happened..And yet all we see feel and touch will to us be here one day no more...' So all we have to lose is already spoken for; that's how it presents itself to me ..'

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2013 5:34:00 AM

Good morning SIS, stopping by to say hi, sending hugs to you. Once again I miss you. Hope you are well... I stopped by yesterday to say hi. Can't wait to hear from you...sending hugs and lots of love... my dearest Leonora, poetry sis. xoxoxoox...Linda

Stephan McBride

Date: 8/24/2013 10:35:00 PM

amen, praise the lord that he can flood our desires out and give new heart and mind,, love it

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2013 9:22:00 AM

A great description of God's power. Well done Leonora.

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/24/2013 10:24:00 AM

And so it was Leonora, I believe that a large boat or ship remains were discovered on the mountain of Arrarat in present day Turkey, quite interesting don't you think...? I have enjoyed the read just now..'

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/23/2013 2:18:00 PM

What a capture of history. Tremendous lines & impacting images.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/23/2013 12:46:00 PM

An old story retold. Enjoyed it very much.. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/23/2013 10:57:00 AM

Wonderfully penned Noah's Ark. Loved always my friend, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/23/2013 9:58:00 AM

wonderful poetry, just love this...

Gideon Foli

Date: 6/22/2013 9:54:00 AM

Great Piece Leo... captivating. I wrote a poem with the same subject matter entitled the Door. May be you can check up. I love it too. Thanks.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/21/2013 11:43:00 PM

Excellent. Great story is remembered again. Very creative. Tfs

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 6/21/2013 11:12:00 AM

wow!! I like this new form you wrote my dear friend Leonora... very creative as always.. Good luck in the contest :) hugs!!! :).

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2013 9:47:00 AM

Hi Leo, stopping by to say hi, and see how you are doing, I've been busy at work and so on. I have my daughter helping me with my contest right now. lol, I'm so busy I haven't had time grading any contest. It is so hot down here, I'm thinking of closing my restaurant in the morning, and opening in the evening at 6pm till 9 am the next day. lol, what do you think? The heat and a kitchen with a grill and other heating elements don't mix. I'll be back later to see if you post a new poem. luv~PD

Frank Lee

Date: 6/20/2013 11:07:00 PM

well done. lee

Donna Jones

Date: 6/20/2013 5:09:00 PM

Leonora...hello.....I love this poem of yours...not only a classic but it made me smile....hope you are well...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2013 2:47:00 PM

SOUPY MAIL FOR YOU!..:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2013 4:09:00 PM

Great story that you have retold..Enjoyed reading it today..It is always good to try a new form..Thanks for the consoling works on Gail's blog..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/19/2013 8:19:00 AM

delightful all the way, leonora... SOUP MAIL!.. i'll be ib BKK this friday to sunday..:) huggs

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/18/2013 2:01:00 PM

I think I just read the winning poem for the contest. I'm not familiar with this form but I like the repetition and flow.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2013 12:52:00 PM

Hello My sweetest friend and poetry sis, Leonora, love the way you unfold one of my most favorite bible stories. Noah and his Ark." A perfect 10 poem. I love the way Noah obeyed God's rule, through the reflection of two. I am going to look up the form. a lovely poem, very graceful ending.. new life again... always & forever... thank you for this poem, a new favorite poem... I will add it on my BLOG BIO... tomorrow... always~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2013 11:45:00 AM

- An amazing "Noah's Ark" poem, Leonora! - The best I've read for this contest. - This is the contest winning poem, number one! - Talented you are, Leonora! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/17/2013 11:13:00 AM

This is a tremendous write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful and amazing poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, such a lovely poem, Great work!!

Skat A

Date: 6/17/2013 10:49:00 AM

This is a wonderful entry, Leonora. new life again. Wishing you luck with your amazing poem. take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~