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No Substance

THE Pitfalls of Pretty Is like being "Tall and that's all" The Boys want the Girls want.. No one wants to pay Upkeep Fee.. No maintenance I am free. Cheap Just say "Pretty please." to Please me.. And I am yours. Eager and desperate To let my pretty please you. All I have is my PRETTY I need to To retain MY pretty. To keep the pretty, Pretty.! Pretty soon my pretty is disappeared, And no pretty attitude established No pretty personality developed... Pretty is now pretty Petty,shaky and shabby. Has built no Character , No substance on which to stand. So she falls into the pitfalls Of being Pretty ...and that's all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/7/2015 11:39:00 PM
This is pretty amazing. Deep thoughts! Loved the play with words, Vicki!
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Date: 9/7/2015 10:15:00 PM
A pretty dam good poem!
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:24:00 PM
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