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No Son Shine

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No Son Shine

Bursting barrel chest
peacock strutting rooster crow
amazed am I as you grow.

Sad sorrow demise
no joy for me in your eyes
tension anger soulful sighs.

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  1. Date: 5/8/2009 6:50:00 AM
    Sorry, but those sad eyes will sparkle again. They have to. I love you. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 4:48:00 AM
    The sensitivity of your words, the delicacy of your thoughts are all contained in your poem on the Himalayan Sunset featured today. That delicate sense of balance is not missing here either in the economy of thought, what a beautiful mind you have. Congratulations, love and blessings

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 1:29:00 PM
    I lovely tight piece of writing. The rhyme structure works very well and the way that the lines have been composed shows that there is nothing forced in this. I love the way that it says som much with so few words. But you manage to create a very musical poem all the same!