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No Parachutes,Safety Nets,Souls,Or Hope

Love is whispered and not forgotten If this be so I deaf to soft lipped invitations seek no thought of hope I of no past collection hold thought To forget is gruesome and beautiful My eyes, swift allies in my war of world tell no lies Silent in the 4 walled chalkboard blue Shakespearean mad men twist their tongues with words of bland hue I believe the concept of Ugliness is more profound than that of beauty Dreams of my bladed face fill up behind my eyes...scratching my mind Nothing goes SURPRISE! anymore To love and lose is not the exciting protagonist to never having lost love the optimists run in circles pretenders of despair hunt themselves Every street is Desolation row and my window is covered with blood Nothing comforts anything No advice ....just surprises

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2009 8:55:00 PM
The write is intriguing, the subject is despairing " Ugliness more profound" Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/16/2009 11:36:00 AM
Keep this. I love that first couplet. I wish that I had written that. Thank you for your remembrance of me and my poem. I appreciate it. I apologize for the delay, but I was moving all last month into this from New Jersey to North Carolina. Forgive me. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 9/29/2009 7:14:00 AM
Truly, "pretenders of despair hunt themselves," Kalonji. This is a very powerful, thought-provoking write. But I do hope you find something that brings you comfort. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:35:00 AM
Kalonji, thank you for sharing your writing with us today. Love, Carol
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