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No Ordinary Day

There was a day No ordinary day Until that day, I always had the stars to hold My mother had said I am going now When you are alone, you will be all right Whether or not you think so The stars will tell you so … Beloved fields withdrew into space I watched them dwindle, watched new lands unfold before my face Weary mountains made an exchange For shapeless pain But night settled down And with it came new stars Some were the old ones, some I would soon discover And though the nights were longer The stars still shined in the same familiar way They seemed to be closer And they seemed to be brighter Yet, they were harder to reach Harder to hold in my hand... But, somehow they told me My mother was right ------------------------------------------- Inspired By Frank Herrera's Contest: "Coming of Age" By Carrie Richards 2/6/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 9:17:00 PM
CARRIE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:35:00 PM
Letting go! No easy task. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/27/2012 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:25:00 AM
A beautifil poem reminding us of our own letting go.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 2/27/2012 10:30:00 AM
I also meant to say congratulations on the win. So touching.
Date: 2/27/2012 9:26:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a splendid win for this outstanding creative write so beautiful.. a well deserved win for sure luv..
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Date: 2/9/2012 12:27:00 PM
Another beautiful write. You are so gifted Carrie. Avis
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:13:00 AM
Smile ˜ "....Apart from 'Christ Jesus,' their already dead." * I hope this is the gift that your precious mothers heart gave unto her daughter which in turn whispers its Light of Truth into your beauties spirit that in turn brings the assurance that your priceless heart alludes unto here my dear Carrie Richards ˜ Love always, John!:) *
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