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No Name Star

That light in sky is a no name star It shines marvelous even though far For me the other stars less bright are. It is a love symbol. It is our. Nothing is there gleaming for us more Since that star is the eternal sign Of our future happy and benign With no name for light of yours and mine. The sign of love for girl I adore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/15/2014 1:02:00 PM
so very beautiful Mario. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:51:00 AM
A romantic and well composed write, Mario. congrats
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Mario De Paz
Date: 9/15/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement. I tried to compose with the rules on rhymes but following an intense internal request of my senses
Date: 9/13/2014 2:55:00 PM
What a beautiful romantic write this is! Just such a lovely piece! Bravo! Pandita
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Mario De Paz
Date: 9/15/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for coming, Pandita. I have only tried to write down my sentiments

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