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No More You

No more you; I've thought this through. I've shed a tear; our end is here! That feeling is gone... It lasted too long! I despise this feeling; No heart for healing! I feel like an animal, Can't even think rational; Locked in a cage, it just fuels my rage! I don't like what I have become, but that has all just been done! You are the cause... Out comes my claws! I want you to vanish! All thoughts of you to banish, Out of my life, No more your wife! Wedding vows come to an end; no more me the knee to bend!

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Delysia Hendricks

Date: 3/8/2013 3:19:00 PM

Oooh, good rant, Rienie. I like your perfect rhythm-and-rhyme style. Good one well worthy of a double 7. :)

Amethyst Stone
Date: 3/31/2013 6:47:00 AM

Hi Delysia, thanks for the compliment, sometimes we just need to get some feelings off a persons's chest and what a better way to do that than in a poem. Hope you have an awesome day!