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No Grievances Permitted

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No Grievances Permitted

Spooling southward on shattered wing-
I ache to fold from life’s cruel sting! 
(I’d rather die, than say goodbye)
Because I can’t repent this suffering

(A reinvention of 'No Assembly Required')

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:30:00 PM
    wow, I agree with sandy's assessment: so few words, such big impact. Congrats to you

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:04:00 PM
    so few words...such a big impact...nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:01:00 AM
    A truly magnificent re-invention. Well done and congrats on your well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Joshua---A well-penned verse and many congrats on your win in the contest! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Congratulations, well done.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:21:00 AM
    congrats and a lovely write.