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No Greater Love

You're pregnant. The doctor confirms what I already knew And the fear and shock set in. I'm to young, Only 20, to immature I'm not ready. But this little person is a part of me And I already love it. It's a boy. Four ultrasounds later I finally know what you are And I cry. I was hoping for a pink baby And I'm hormonal and scared. How do you raise a boy? What will he like? But I already loved him with all of me. It's time. After three trips to the hospital for pre-term labor It's finally real now. Twenty-nine hours in labor in the hospital Almost three hours of pushing And I see him And I hold him And I know in that moment my life has begun. Before that day I was selfish And on a downward spiral of self-destruction But from that moment on My life was you And I may have given you life My dear sweet love But on the day I realized I was carrying you, You saved mine. You will always be The only man that mommy will ever need And with every second Of every day I will love you More than the moment before And I will keep and protect you For the rest of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/14/2015 1:31:00 PM
such a Beautiful tribute Brittney....God Blessed you so evidently....it was meant to be just to make you better....I am glad for you that you got yourself together....;)
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Date: 10/10/2015 11:29:00 AM
Brittney, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2015 8:34:00 AM
A wonderful bundle of joy indeed!!! Congratulations for your #1 placement Brittney!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/8/2015 2:16:00 AM
Wonderful write Brittney! Congrats on superb win!
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Brittney Tyler
Date: 10/15/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/8/2015 1:19:00 AM
Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/8/2015 12:12:00 AM
Brittany, I can totally relate to this poem. My children are my life. Congratulations on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 10/7/2015 6:14:00 PM
I can't imagine my life without my son - such an heartfelt touching write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brittney Tyler
Date: 10/15/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thank you. My kids are my world.
Date: 10/7/2015 2:33:00 PM
Hi, Brittney - I don't know that we've ever visited each other's poems before. I want to congratulate you on your win with this heart-warming write. I, too, wrote about giving birth to my one and only, my baby boy. Isn't it something how after you give birth, the sky is bluer, the grass greener, all that touches our senses, is enhanced! Again, good win, girl ... CayCay
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Brittney Tyler
Date: 10/8/2015 9:27:00 AM
CayCay- thanks and congrats on your win as well. It is crazy how giving birth can completely change your whole life. I always tell my kids that they are all the best parts of their father and me put together to form perfect bundles of pure love
Date: 10/7/2015 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful write Brittney.
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James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 2:58:00 PM
I've found NEED to be an unhealthy emotion that gives away control of one's life (just my opinion), but the desire to share your life is a different and potentially beautiful thing.
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Brittney Tyler
Date: 10/7/2015 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, my little guy is 10 years old now, and not so little, but still the only man I need.
Date: 10/7/2015 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Brittney Tyler
Date: 10/7/2015 2:18:00 PM
thanks

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