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My dream, my desire is one with a naughty theme... four women and me engaged in some sweaty fun - dribbling, scoring.......basketball. For "Tanka me a Dream" contest sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. by George Aul

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Date: 2/13/2011 12:03:00 PM
Sounds like a plan George and a very interesting dream too luv.. good luck in the contest with this imaginative entry which I just know Michael will luv being a sports enthusiast..haha..
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:19:00 AM
Very witty write George!Love it---kashinath
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Date: 2/12/2011 11:11:00 PM
hahaha, Good one, George! Maybe they are naked? heehee
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Date: 2/12/2011 4:22:00 PM
Nice dream, and you have described it well in this tanka.
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Date: 2/12/2011 1:52:00 PM
LOL! Best of luck in Michael's Contest, George. Always, Annalise
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