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Below is the poem entitled NO FOOD NO GLORY! which was written by poet Neldy Jolo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Bombing here
Bombing there
Bombing everywhere!

I want to eat
My tummy calls for it
But how could I get
Military do blockage
Basic need is sought
No glory if no food
It is for human good

After bombing in Sulu
UN stops sending so
Still afraid to go
Though fighting is through 

When hunger is calling
It the worst thing ever
Stealing became natural thing

War indeed devastating
Many innocent souls are stolen 
Defending peace to the end

Glory is basically from food
Energizing man to good
Why freedom is hard to upload?

Give freedom to Sulu
Independence too
Don’t let justice to go

Copyright © Neldy Jolo

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  1. Date: 8/14/2009 4:43:00 PM
    Thank you for this perspective, Neldy! You remind us all of what is truly essential in life. Donna

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 10:21:00 AM
    Some one is always trying to boss someone else around, you think the world would get the point, no one wants to be anyones..slave. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 10:46:00 PM
    Brilliant! I like it, Neldy. Nice flow and a great message. Good job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 7:16:00 AM
    War isn't the best option most times. I was tempted to say that you like food but there's a great iota of truth in your piece freedom is fueled by food. Great you Neldy! Why don't you change the form of this poem from I do not know to verse. Adeleke