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Night's Devotion

Gasping in passion, Thy full lashes enchants me, Lips of confection, We drove in vast ecstasy, 'Twas pure love and devotion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/29/2015 11:53:00 AM
very vivid, I can imagine myself on that situation - keep writing Czarinyka
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Date: 5/29/2015 12:55:00 PM
Thank you Michael, appreciate it much :)
Date: 5/29/2015 7:45:00 AM
Lovely and hot images Czari (may I call you that?)
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Date: 5/29/2015 9:42:00 AM
Sure, nice knowing you kim..
Date: 5/29/2015 7:10:00 AM
Oh that sounds terrific, passion in every word!
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Date: 5/29/2015 7:16:00 AM
Thank you it was my first attempt of Tanka, and I'm glad I somehow have done justice to it.

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