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Nightmare In the Beginning

Walks along the beach, Watching the sunset on the roof top of his car. Waiting for it to set so we can drive home. As he opens the door, He kneels to the ground reaches into his pocket and pulls out a box. "will you be mine forever?" i still hear the words like they are being echoed on a tall mountain. Speechless i shook my head yes he closed the door. and he got into the drivers seat. the ride home was amazing except we never made it. the streets seemed so still so quiet and then the world seemed to be ending. hit on one side not mine but his as tears roll down my cheeks. i see him sitting there. Against the deformed steering wheel blood down his forehead and blood down his shirt. This is the end. This was the beginning of something i knew i wouldn't survive the beginning of the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/28/2009 6:15:00 PM
oh wow. just wow. such a sad ending. but some peoples reality. I'm sorry if this happened to you.
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Date: 5/5/2009 12:04:00 PM
so sad, who could have ever guessed? so very sad, BIG hugs Light & Love
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:17:00 AM
Wow, this made me tear up. This is an amazing beautiful write!:)
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:27:00 AM
Very sad this really happen to you? Or to a friend? What inspired you to write this? Its really good keep up the good work:D Dustin
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:38:00 AM
Oh, how heartbreaking. I actually lost the love of my life in November 2007 and still have not stopped loving him. He was killed by his uncle while hunting for deer. This write gets the reader all geared up for love, and romance and then a dramatic twist takes them on a downward spiral to sadness. Very well written conveying the hope and pain of true love. Well done. Smiles (through tears) from Lolita
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