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Nightmare

The devil watchs where ever I go I try to say "No!" But still he comes As I sit and hum Satan is coming to get me Why won't you let me be?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/29/2008 9:06:00 PM
Having a bad day?? We all feel like this some time or another... (suggestion: change 'you' to 'he' in the last line since this is a third person piece) Love, Keith
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Date: 11/5/2008 5:36:00 PM
we all have our demons that torture our very soul. the strong one is the one that can hear the angels on the other shoulder and heed their call. God bless.... great pen bravo
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:24:00 PM
temtations are there to test us . you have to pass the test becaues if you do then you can be used for something special. or else you can let satan use you. you choose. john
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:23:00 PM
ok
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:20:00 PM
r u sure? are you aposulty siriouse and not just wanting to get back at david or someone and going to dump me after like a day? cause thats what happens alot
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:03:00 PM
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