Night Time

Night time is beginning I can feel dusk closing in Grey cats lurking in dark shadows Hearing noises, don't know what they are The moon like a golfball, brighter than any star The frost air is creeping in Ice glistening on the roads More and more people leave the streets Everyone's asleep, night-time is at its peak

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Estela Canama

Date: 1/9/2017 2:16:00 AM

A very wonderful acrostic! Welcome to Poetry Soup! Keep on posting your poems here, Leah. God bless!

Carole Duet

Date: 1/2/2017 11:10:00 PM

Very nice Leah. So descriptive and easy to imagine. I liked it very much. And, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do. Carole Duet

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Date: 12/20/2016 3:42:00 PM

Leah, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@