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Below is the poem entitled NIGHT STROLL which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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tonight I stroll with the wise moon, throwing
life’s marbles unto muddy pools
of ennui, and she shifts her face against
cerulean breezes, tasting the mildness

on lapping shores…she heaves
gently of the moment, renewing my senses;
a warm elixir to my weary mind
and lonely refrains, delicately cleansing

snarled reflections and disheveled
pauses; her flicker bestows fire of hope
and answered promise to yesterday’s petitions
tasting my breath flow from her soul,

I beam at her crown restored, as she cuddles
my unspoken words, her own song,
a blazed aspiration fulfilling my favor
and under panels of grass, I realize
she has learned to walk with me in the rain.

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:45:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..Great job..Thanks for stopping by..This one is wrapped in poetic descriptiveness..Sara

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 5:27:00 AM
    hai Nette, you're back!!! a beautiful poem wrapped in creativity. How I loved the last stanza!!! :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:29:00 AM
    this is simply beautiful wonderful to see you posting are such a beautiful writer..take,Deb

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 9:21:00 PM
    The magician has started her magic again!Wonderful lines you have penned in this Moon poem Nette.Love the ending very much.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:16:00 PM
    gosh, it's great to see you back here and with such an amazing poem as this one. Please soupmail me and let me know where the heck you have been!!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:58:00 PM
    This is a phenomenal write my friend! I am sooo happy to see your return, you were sorely missed Nette! I know Yasmin and I were wondering where went to, and were hoping that everything was ok! I'm glad that you decided to come back and share your incredible poetry! This is a tremendous example of your awesome poems, such a delightful piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Glad she's back, love your beauty, always xxx

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 3:54:00 PM
    This is what we have been missing here, with a Frost/Cummings type of ending--awesome Nette--faving this for sure!! "She has learned to walk with me in the rain"--love it

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:33:00 PM
    - A beautiful poem contest Nette, good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise --- Nice to have you back, my dear friend. - <3