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Night Listens To My Dreams

Night listens to my dreams And tells me what they mean I dreamt the moon was blue A wan and pallid hue I'm told because of you Dreams of sky in motion Mirrored on the ocean The dream it couldn't stay The tide washed clouds away I'm told pain comes in waves I dreamt you turned to ice The stars froze in your eyes The shadow of the moon Took you away too soon I'm told love led to ruin r ~ 20Feb14

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Date: 3/13/2014 1:01:00 PM
"A wan and pallid hue"- fantastic verse. You have many great verses in this piece. You are a natural and talented rhymer. I hope to read much more from you; you have penned some wonderful gems :)
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Rick Richardson
Date: 3/13/2014 1:23:00 PM
Thanks. Let's sell some. %/

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