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Night Jasmine's Perfumery

I alight from my parked car Ecstatic at the fragrance Of my night jasmine bowers Guarding my iron gate The aromatic tree is a perfumery At midnight it starts budding By dawn in full bloom drizzling A white and saffrony carpet in my arbour I hand pick the teeny pristine stars Perched on saffron centred tubes Placing these corralled arbour artists In a watered crystal bowl My hands retain its perfume for hours Nostalgic reminders of getting a sapling From dad's nursery to plant in my garden Dad left behind his aroma in his night jasmine. SECOND October 22, 2015 Contest: Favourite Flower Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 11/10/2015 2:56:00 PM
Balveen, lovely memory. Used to have Night Jasmine growing under my bedroom window many years ago.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/11/2015 9:00:00 AM
That's wonderful! Isn't it? They are so beautiful and fragrant!
Date: 11/10/2015 11:49:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your "Favorite Flower win." SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/11/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 11/10/2015 8:46:00 AM
Lovely poem, Balveen. Congratulations on our win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/11/2015 9:01:00 AM
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/11/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 11/9/2015 2:54:00 PM
Hey Balveen, a hearty congratulations on your wonderful winning poem in the contest! A beautiful flower and great descriptive imagery. A well deserved win. Be Blessed, Neva
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/9/2015 10:01:00 PM
Hi Neva! Nice meeting and many thanks!
Date: 11/9/2015 2:44:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/9/2015 10:03:00 PM
Hi Jan! Thanks ever so much!
Date: 11/9/2015 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations in your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/9/2015 10:04:00 PM
Thanks, dear Nayda!
Date: 11/3/2015 6:47:00 PM
this is so nice and how the jasmine's scent is a reminder to you of your dad! Hope it does well in the flower contest.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/3/2015 7:13:00 PM
It is very fragrant and delicate to look at, Andrea.
Date: 11/3/2015 9:39:00 AM
in the sweet aroma of jasmine beautifully painted piece balveen excellent pen wishing you a blessed week
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/3/2015 11:02:00 AM
Hi Liam! Thanks for your appreciation! Balveen

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