Night

the moon tails off remnants log off And wings cool off On the cloud lei Sleepy cats botch Sitting on crotch Divine night watch Ascent of dei (C) Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/8/2014 10:49:00 AM

It is night, and as I read, I decide it's like, your poem's a seed. It sowed a question, and deep reflection, on Who's in charge, certainly no one at large. Thanks for sharing Rajat. Kim Patrice :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/8/2014 12:06:00 PM

My sweet Kim. You are so wonderful...poesía en movimiento....agradecimiento, aprecio XXXX rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/8/2014 8:20:00 AM

Hello Rajat! Very nice pen here my dear friend! Enjoyed it! :) have a wonderful week!:) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/8/2014 9:35:00 AM

Hi sweet D. Hugs! XXX rajat