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Nicholas Street Jail

The structure is imposing, massive and fearful. Built in 1862 as a jail and gallows for the worst of humanity. "Living" conditions were sickening and appalling. The top floor was reserved for death-row -- end-of-the-line. The prison was closed in 1972 and was deemed to be heritage -- yet, no modernizations could mask its eerie cold-spots and consistent presence of dread. One-hundred-fifty unmarked graves were found there. Disturbing noises, putrid, gaseous odors, and ghostly sightings of hanged inmates and crazed staff were common claims. Today, the renovated death-row cells can be booked and rented. I made a bet (a sure thing, I thought) with my hubby that I could spend twenty-four hours locked in one of those horrid cages. After all, a two-carat diamond is worth a little scare, don't you agree? Modern conveniences (TV, phone, tablets, etc.) were forbidden in the "rooms." My white bread and American cheese sandwich tasted quite good with an ice-cold glass of water. I was actually feeling giddy. I could picture that sparkling diamond on my finger. Thankfully, books and magazines were allowed. I sat upright on the single, thin mattress and began to read until the lights-out announcement echoed throughout the dark. Immediately I felt a pressing, claustrophobic panic. The cells were small; but, the blackness seemed to be immense and spreading. A single window in the narrow corridor that separated the cells let in a tiny sliver of moonlight. The silence grew maddening. Could I be the only guest? I didn't want to think about that. I closed my eyes and tried to sleep. It was early morning when I was awakened by faint, distant voices. I felt hot and sweaty. I pulled the sheet back. I was in bra and panties -- shockingly, I couldn't recall ever having removed my clothes . . . . I got up and grabbed hold of the bars. Save for a crack of bluish moon. I could see nothing beyond my cell. What I subsequently experienced paralyzed me to that spot in a pool of drenching terror. Snickering. Maniacal laughter. Wolf-whistles. The animal grunts of men who've not been with women for a very long time. Multiple, invisible hands began feeling my body and stroking my legs. I felt unmentionable things poking and prodding me -- everywhere. In the midst of this unspeakable assault, I heard the creaking of cell doors; plodding footsteps; wailing, weeping, praying; and the most horrifying gurgling and choking sounds coming from the direction of the old hangman's gallows. I could see and smell these apparitions -- pitiful, unclean and diseased souls with broken necks and severed eyeballs. I must have collapsed at that point. The next morning, I was discovered unconscious on the hard cell floor. I was rushed to the nearest emergency room. There were cuts and bruises all over my body. While there were numerous indicators pointing to a mass sexual attack, no traces of semen or any physical evidence could be found. The police were investigating. I woke up groggy, to see the face of my sweet hubby staring down at me so worried and concerned. "I guess I lost the bet," I said. He leaned over, kissed me, and placed a brilliant, two-carat diamond ring in my bandaged hand. "You deserve more than jewelry for consenting to stay in that monstrous place. You get some rest. We'll have plenty of time to talk later." I closed my eyes and began to drift and . . . slowly, softly the moans and fondling commenced . . . _____________________________ September 21, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/Nicholas Street Jail Copyright Protected, ID 16-831-620-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudony. Submitted to the contest, Scare Me Good Contest Honorable Mention

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Date: 10/19/2016 6:47:00 PM
Well done and congrats on your placement
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:37:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeekkkk! Now this is creepy at it's best! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/7/2016 10:31:00 AM
Excellent intense write BW. Was it worth it, to never be able to close your eyes again without reliving that night?
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Date: 10/7/2016 9:37:00 AM
Tom, you know I did extensive research to write this poem but without your help it just did not have the scare required, but this jail, the graves, the hauntings all exist and it still stands deemed Heritage, when I walk by it , I can feel the evil... thanks for honoring my work.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2016 9:41:00 AM
My original can be found on my list of poems under the same name.
Date: 10/7/2016 8:16:00 AM
Broken Wings' true-life account of an old, infamous prison was a fact-filled and thoroughly interesting entry. However, it begged for some additional scares -- which I volunteered to provide (bad sponsor). Of course, a collaboration between myself and Broken Wings technically disqualifies this narrative from the contest. Please disregard the indicated placement -- it is here only as a collaborative experiment with an honorable mention in a premium contest from an alternate dimension. ;-)
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Date: 9/22/2016 1:40:00 PM
Perfect tale for Halloween!
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Date: 9/22/2016 11:01:00 AM
This is a real place that still exists in my city. I hate it as it is so sinister and evil. It cannot be torn down as it is deemed Heritage. It gives me the creeps, horrendous things happened there and those graves should be moved so the souls can rest in peace ~
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Date: 9/21/2016 7:10:00 PM
Fascinating and scary, BW. Wonderful story. Barry
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