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Next of Kin

where am (i can't find me) oh my (yo tambien) it's essential, follow the leader many places- we've never been, i'm deeply moved- the next of kin: broke free from the tree that roots with in even when (i see i lose) i win i know better yet- i keep forgetting my sweater- in the rabid air, frostbitten, chewing bites gnawing holes thru the night: 'all the better to breathe thru'- out the solar system of a downward spiral. my breath is bile, i expect a single file- following a (leader lost) can't keep up the cost is a cause, thrifty cheap laws stretching- still missing the point

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Date: 9/5/2010 4:22:00 PM
interesting style.
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Date: 9/2/2010 2:09:00 PM
deep write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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