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to orbit in a merry-go-round of plants, herbal and wanton wild on a tumbling hillside, dews of mint freckle palms of curled leaves— stem for stem-- translating the language of time, of how grasses relish myrrh's fragrance as wet hands paddle my dusky eyes through mid-evening’s breath . a threadbare field awaits its bridal veils where my feet wander along an orchard like a holy pilgrimage: foliage drifts without blame or sense of pity, till new sprouts linger on trunks yellowed by the kiss of glossy clay, as skin is to being in a maddened desire to wake, wake a morning flowing with midnight birds. and dying unto the selves, how flaming in amber these old leaves breathe of last and bury themselves into malleable streaks of lightened mud, part ground, part wind… dusk sings the break of newborn morn in a funeral and wedding borne from such autumnal tenderness, that being in this ethereal space rouses both pleasure and patience within my bones… while the world bears more seeds. To Be Contest of Debbie Guzzi by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Thank you for your comments on my work it made me feel good about the write I was a little nervious about this one. loved the above write also we must love mother nature not distroy her.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your win my friend. It was really beautiful. I missed earlier, now recovered. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Congratulations nette,,, love your natural, nature flow.....Ty cheriex

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:41:00 PM
    hey and it won with a GREAT win. Congrats, NEtte.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Congrats, nette, this is great:) Jag

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Such beautiful lines. You turn nature into words. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Ahhh this is certainly refreshing. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:36:00 PM
    This indeed , is a piece to refresh and restore oneself in such bliss and pleasure. Lovely poem, as always, Nette!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Nette once again you've shown how talented you are. An outstanding poem my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 12:56:00 PM
    YES this is BEING, being involves merging as well as being alone! You are always a pallet cleanser! ;) like sorbet!Congrad's on Your WIN!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:28:00 AM
    LOVE to read your poems again. this one especially!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:25:00 AM
    Amazing poetry from you Nette!This is excellent!Love this!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 6:55:00 PM
    Boy you sure make the cycle of mother nature planting her seeds sound beautiful!!!!!! You are magical nette ! Really!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Very beautiful, Nette. You are back here with a lot of great new poems for us!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 11:01:00 AM
    You have surely captured my imagination and put it into words! By the mere seeds you have created a masterpiece with this poem my friend! I am impressed by the eloquence that you have spun this write Nette! What a delectable piece, such a tremendous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:49:00 AM
    wow nette, this just blows one away,, you are so amazing, your poetry, is so classical,, yes from another planet, or another era, you are that good, so inspirational

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:11:00 AM
    You take me to another world Nette as only you can do,beautiful as ever xxxVxxx

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:56:00 AM
    Sigh!!! Your stanzas are of a limitless rapture. Keep placing those seeds...

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:45:00 AM
    This is breathtaking Nette,I love the exquisite imagery you painted here.Warm love to you.