New Species

with slow, stilted gait neck bent and eyes fixed downward… the smart phone zombie 18 Mar 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 9:43:00 PM

David, Congrats on your "New Species win." PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:02:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy win with this superb write david..

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/28/2016 1:16:00 PM

yes...a new species is born, Good one, David:SuZ

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 3/19/2016 5:14:00 AM

Wow, this it so precise and true senryu and the title you chose is excellent - another 7.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2016 7:01:00 PM

Having been bumped into so many times in the street I think we can all relate to this one David - sad reflection of life today for so many people:-( I think this will fly high for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7