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New Puppy Restless

new puppy restless nighttime cries for company… come torpid coldness Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fifteenth Place Winner ~ "Very Strict Haiku” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Henderson Nov. 29, 2011 Kigo: torpid coldness/winter Caryl Muzzey 11/9/2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/13/2011 7:53:00 AM

This Haiku is so interesting Caryl. A very good break. I see by the comments below you placed in the contest. Congratulations. I have added you as a fav poet. I hope that is okay with you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2011 5:23:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/11/2011 12:11:00 PM

oh poor puppy-- but you definitely brought us there with this haiku, Caryl! Congrats! :)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 11:15:00 AM

A lovely haiku here Caryl.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:15:00 AM

C.M.~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 8:45:00 PM

Congrats Caryl on a wonderful win in this contest for these fascinating words luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:29:00 PM

Great vocabulary in this one: torpid! Congrats on the HM, Caryl.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2011 5:46:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Caryl. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol