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New Orleans

Well placed out, surrounding barrier. Musical inventions from where its been created. The streak and the rhythm of Charlie Treats well consumed life. The findings in the streets advantages, advantages, advantages. The need of money to meet the day's pay day to day. Meets, meets, meets. It's the repeat on replay everyday of his life. Consumption, this place, a little piece of him. The food, music, what he became, what he is, what he's lived through. The expectations of run ins with peeps from the other states. The Puzzle pieces completed Deep within, within, within. Never to be broken from where he came. This stone wall is the barrier of his heart. This street is the road that consumed him to stop at every stop sign he sees. Sugar cane is the smell of consumption that takes him home. Running in with people from others states is expectations of dollar bills to be followed. New Orleans is never to be broken it is maps of alleyways that lead to Charlie Treats heart.

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Date: 1/20/2016 8:30:00 PM
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