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New Love: by Griffins Ndhine I had loved ones My heart was all mourns Like it was pierced by thorns Coz by my love I was deceived Thought I was loved, a shock is all I received Behind my back, by another man she had conceived. I am tempted to love again But in my heart the pain still reign Is it true that the same all girls will remain? This remains my biggest worry For my self I again never want to be sorry In my life I want not to narrate this same story. I had tried having a girlfriend seeing other men was her trend I was never enough for her yet to me she was the only lover And playing her I did never bother Where will I find one not to break my heart? From where do I find love that will not hurt? Who is she, the one who will never depart? I know you are out there somewhere You are a type that is so rare And all that I want in a lady you bare. I hope to marry so as to burry my worry I hope a wife will not be the same as a girlfriend I hope a wife will never offend. So I got this one just recently I am ready to love her sincerely Her beauty is on point perfectly She is what I need exactly We got to talk but she told me No I gave her time, I went back again She told me No. A second No? And how I cherish her How I adore her, Oh my! I had to up my game And so did I. I skillfully redrew my pickup lines I got the lines, I rehearsed the lines I went back again to her This time with something new Exactly what she wanted to hear That she is a part of my life. That I want her to be my wife Coz her beauty is rare And that she is my answered prayer. She fell for it and I got her. Her I will marry Then I will have no worry To her I will be everything so she will lack nothing I want her to see no other man I want to be the only one I hope in her heart I will reign I hope hurting me she will refrain I hope and hope she will never leave but with me she will remain to live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/6/2013 12:24:00 AM
Griffins, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, I look forward to enjoying your verse often. Light & Love
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:02:00 AM
Thnx to you all who have congratulated me.its nice being here at poetry soup.long live poetry soup.
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:08:00 PM
Such a lovely one! Welcome to poetrysoup, Griffins! Take care my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:22:00 PM
when the right one comes along things fall into place better....nice poem, welcome to poetry soup! :)
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Griffins Ndhine
Date: 11/4/2013 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Sandra Adams.
Date: 11/1/2013 8:52:00 PM
Love can be an emotional roller.coaster. Very beautifully written.
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Griffins Ndhine
Date: 11/4/2013 5:03:00 AM
thnks.
Date: 11/1/2013 12:30:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Griffins ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:55:00 AM
Griffins, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Griffins Ndhine
Date: 11/4/2013 5:05:00 AM
thnks. I am unable to find the contest page.may you please send me the link here?

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