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Once I saw the dark and cold night creeping, slowly pushing out warm daylight seeping; heard the blaring, hopeless sounds of sleeping echoing despair’s sad, woeful weeping. Felt the pain of fruitless daydreams heaping deep inside my heart and soul now reaping nighttime's empty stillness crying, keeping silent tears within me forming, steeping. Then I saw the morning sun safekeeping warm and brilliant rays aglow now peeping. Darkest ghosts of night were chased, sent leaping from the hope of brand new day now sweeping. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Monorhyme Mania Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 08/29/2016 (Iambic Pentameter) 10 syllables per line, five feet per line Feminine endings, (last syllable unstressed), and first syllable stressed. / _ / _ / _ / _ / _

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Date: 8/30/2016 3:24:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement with this amazing monoryhme lady! :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/30/2016 8:25:00 AM
Hi Sandra. Congrats for your top placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy. Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 9:39:00 PM
Amazing! Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sushma. Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 9:32:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much, Sandra! A nice flow. "Silent tears steeping" Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 7:03:00 PM
Hi Sandra, I really enjoy reading your poetry. Your poetry is amazing and so well written. And this monorhyme was no exception. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was deserved: -) Alexis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis. I am honored with your very uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 6:32:00 PM
Wow you went all out on your poem Sandra! Really an excellent monorhyme! Congratulations on your second placement! 7 ; )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:39:00 PM
Thank you once again, Connie, for your amazing support! Hugs, SAndra
Date: 8/29/2016 6:31:00 PM
as I suspected...I see your name high on the list for this write. It's filled with hope. Congratulations, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lin! Nice to receive your visit again and see your amazing poem at the top of the podium! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 4:14:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...well deserved...god bless...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, WW! Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 2:37:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra, love the imagery and meter.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/29/2016 2:36:00 PM
Great write, congrats Sandra on your fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:42:00 PM
Great contest, John! I am honored with my placement! Thanks, Sandra
Date: 8/25/2016 2:57:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it.TFS
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ravi. Sandra
Date: 8/24/2016 9:19:00 PM
A lovely write Sandra.
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Date: 8/24/2016 12:53:00 PM
Blessed relief after bad dreams. Love it. daver
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2016 7:44:00 PM
A belated thank you, Daver. Sandra
Date: 8/24/2016 10:40:00 AM
Sweet Sandra! so beautiful! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/24/2016 10:33:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra!
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