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New Bride Groom's Pride

New bride Groom’s pride Few days Bill pays What needs like feeds Time goes Less close Nose snores Night bores Old fights Life tights My First footle trial Written on: 09/04/2014 Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A Contest Name:100 in a ROW contest --3

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Skat A

Date: 7/12/2016 11:24:00 PM

BL, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/13/2016 10:33:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/11/2016 4:25:00 PM

Well done, BL! Congrats on your placement in the contest!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/12/2016 12:12:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2016 4:28:00 AM

BL D., Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/9/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thanks my lovely *friend for enlisting my poem in the winner list and for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/5/2014 10:55:00 AM

these are brilliant BL

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2014 12:36:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your wonderful uplifting comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/5/2014 1:03:00 AM

simple but beautiful, i like itt. best wishes

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2014 8:11:00 AM

Thanks my poet friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2014 9:26:00 PM

hey these are pretty good,BL. the asks/bulks does not rhyme but the others are great!!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/5/2014 8:10:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your helping comment. It's my first one, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Tim Smith

Date: 9/4/2014 4:49:00 PM

These are great....two hearts...life starts.....cheers Tim

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/4/2014 5:01:00 PM

Thanks a lot my friend for visiting my page and for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 4:09:00 PM

baby... maybe great footles once you start you cant stop they are addictive to write LOL :-) Hugs jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 4:20:00 PM

i meant they maybe may have a baby LOL so maybe.. baby for next footle :-)

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/4/2014 4:18:00 PM

One thing, I am babe not baby,Please.

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/4/2014 4:17:00 PM

Perhaps you are right but I shall try to control myself not to be addictive,my lovely friend. Smile always.... Loved always,bl