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(Oneness) The peace loving lake Backed by misty cloudy hills Looked divine with the raindrops Diving in Its transparent soluble roof. With open arms, The lake welcomes its cool guest Making room for the widely travelled Visitor from the skies. The guest enjoys the abundance In its newly found home Enjoying the hospitality Of the rippling waters Looking like translucent dancers. Surfing up and down On the mild gusty waves It ultimately rises in confidence And braves to vanquish its new kingdom Simply by merging into Oneness. October 26, 2015 Contest: 15 Sponsor: Casarah Nance

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Date: 8/20/2015 6:55:00 PM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations --- Always ~LINDA~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 8/21/2015 4:29:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 8/17/2015 3:01:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations with your wonderful win! **SKAT**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 8/17/2015 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 8/17/2015 9:33:00 AM
Sorry having spelt wrong Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 8/17/2015 12:36:00 PM
Don't worry!
Date: 8/17/2015 9:32:00 AM
Very wonderful imagery n use of metaphors compliment Bavleen! Congrats on awesome win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 8/17/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Upma!
Date: 8/15/2015 12:11:00 PM
Lovely metaphor of lake as house! congrats for your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 8/17/2015 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for appreciating the metaphoric conquerer!

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