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Never Think Five Lines Down Poetry Competition

Never Think that I have Lost or forgotten dreams That we shared one night long ago. Never Brenda Atry 5/14/2011 Five Lines Down Poetry Competition

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/18/2011 3:45:00 PM

Very nice use of form! Do I have a Japan verse from you yet? hmmm Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2011 5:04:00 PM

HI Brenda! See, this is the trick to great poetry...to say much with so little words. You are still savoring a moment, huh? You are not alone! Great lines here. Thanks for your encouragement and high regards for my wedding rehearsal poem. It is a true poem...such a sad thing to ask your sis to step down from being your maid of honor. Thx again, Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 2:59:00 PM

Brenda, I hope you still have a chance to make this dream come true. Your poem is so moving. When we are young, our hearts are filled with dreams. Many will relate to the message here. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2011 8:01:00 AM

Very great work that I am sure will get Brian's attention..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the understanding comments left on my blog about the death of my Rat Terrier, Rocky..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2011 7:48:00 AM

Lovely emotional write Brenda.. good luck in the contest.. many of us can relate to your intense words luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2011 1:53:00 PM

Yes, that kind of thing is NEVER fogotten, Brenda!!