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Never Noticed

He was a mild mannered man, a Clark Kent type He was never noticed at work, although he never missed a day in his life Each morning, he exchanged the same bland, trite pleasantries No information was ever given of his personal history He preferred it that way, to just blend into the background Don't make waves, don't make a fuss Whenever their was a corporate crisis, he didn't get involved, he let waste management clean up the mess Though he was given the nickname, Mr. Clean It was because he had a neat office cubicle, tidy as the day he first got there, some thirty years ago Other than that casual, circulating office joke, he wasn't noticed at all one bit He didn't make any personal connections with his co-workers, never tried to socially interact at work or off the job They looked at him as being just an ordinary, boring guy, who didn't have much of a life No one ever noticed him Until he came to work with a gun on his last day Retirement was gonna be a free fall, after he threw the golden parachute away The news reports said that he only killed one person, but they couldn't make the connection as to why It was someone in the Human Resources department, whose unlucky day it was to die A bright, young detective finally figured out the mystery of it all: Louise (Lois) Lane never once, ever returned any of his alter ego calls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/14/2016 11:08:00 PM
Nice catch at the beginning sweet release at the end. Well done Freddie.
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Date: 12/13/2016 1:31:00 PM
great tale freddie and a good twist stephen
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Date: 12/13/2016 1:24:00 PM
Hi Freddie - I thought it was real too! You really portrayed it as that. Well done. :)
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Date: 12/13/2016 12:29:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, This is crazy good. I liked the way you built the story up to deliver a clever and brilliant twist at the end. I could just picture everything in mind. If only she would have been nice to him or returned his phone call.After I finished reading, I thought to myself did this really happen. Because it felt so real.You are good my friend. Excellent job. A without a doubt 7: -) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/13/2016 12:39:00 PM
Nah, Alexis. This is pure fiction, but I'm sure it mirrors something similar that happened in real life. Ty for the gushing, loving comments. I love the love you feel for my poetry. I love your work as well, my dear. Love and peace to you.

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