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Never Giving Up

You told me you loved me, I thought it was true. Now I'm lost and hurting All because of you. You said I was your true love, So I gave you my heart. And all you did with it, was tear it apart. Nine years of nothing, How could this be? We were meant for each other, But I guess that you couldn't see. I'm a big girl and I can face the world. I'll be waiting on that wonderful day, when you can see to find your way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 12:25:00 PM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
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Date: 6/12/2010 12:13:00 PM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:22:00 AM
datz nice work,i connected with it,m too wating for that day.luv saurabh
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:47:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:22:00 AM
I know this feeling. Thank you for sharing- Jodie Q
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Angela. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:10:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/26/2010 5:05:00 AM
Very nicely put, the emotions are clear, the rhyming is nice, a pleasure to read
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:15:00 AM
Dear Angela, You are a true POET the reader can feel the Pain of YOUR Heart Excellent YOU are Quite Talented ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:33:00 AM
Very interesting writing today Angela. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:58:00 PM
Intense, passionate feelings.. Well written poem...:JP]
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