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Never Forget We'Re Sisters

I will carry you forever in my heart From the day we met till the day we part Thoughts of you leaving me now make me ache I know the day the plane pulls away my heart will brake- But I know I can’t hold you hostage Even though we’re sisters, I now must do my best to encourage; For I cannot expect you to live your life discouraged So go reach your dreams You spent your life making others happy to extreme Feel the sun on your back where it gleams Aqua blue seawaters run like streams Take with you the other half of me, When you arrive there at the beautiful sea

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/3/2008 3:46:00 PM

This is an excellent sonnet. I like the flow of the words about your sister. The piece has a wonderful message. Great job! ~Joseph

Maria Key

Date: 8/30/2008 8:15:00 PM

Great writing, a wonderful connection to have with your sister. I am only just now beginning to have such a connection with mine.

Deneen White

Date: 8/30/2008 7:12:00 PM

hi Sara what a lovely tribute to your sister, I am the oldest of 3 sisters, and we are close, hopefully you and your sister will continue to be, and when you do see each other, make the time more memorable, I hope that you send your sisiter a copy of this write, my heart goes out to you, take care

Laura Warthen-Swafford

Date: 8/29/2008 9:26:00 PM

I have always been close with my sister. However for some reason lately we haven't been. Your poem makes me want to go call her. Great job! Laura

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/28/2008 5:30:00 PM

I hope your sister will see this tribute....how lovely! It must have been so difficult to see her fly away. Blessings...Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/28/2008 5:06:00 AM

Laura, you give of yourself clearly in this write. The feelings for this person are seen in each words as your emotions are strongly conveyed. Wonderfully written my friend. Michael

P Sheart

Date: 8/27/2008 6:26:00 AM

Hi Laura What a beautiful heartfelt loving tribute you have written for sister. This poem must have meant the world to her dear Laura. I can feel your bittersweet longing to have her close. Always close in heart distance can't seperate the love we feel. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

Rupavardhini B Raju

Date: 8/27/2008 4:12:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem, i kept thinking of my sister while reading it...

Adell Foster

Date: 8/24/2008 7:03:00 PM

Laura this is a very beautifully wriiten heartfelt poem, I am sure that your sister adores the read as she takes the sisterly ties that bind with her to the beautiful sea. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful write and for critiquing my work. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/24/2008 6:45:00 AM

Distance does not affect the ties that bind. I have not been able to see my brother for three years and though we miss each so very much, the love is strong and enduring. A lovely poem filled with wisdom and pathos. Well done. Love Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/24/2008 5:50:00 AM

Oh Laura this is bittersweet. All the best to her if it is true. Sounds like she is going somewhere beautiful. Sisters are best friends forever. Love, Shar

Farah Chamma

Date: 8/24/2008 3:19:00 AM

A wonderful poem..Carries so much truth and feeling...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/23/2008 8:07:00 PM

Laura this is a wonderful poem that I bet she just adored - Very well written and touching poem - God Bless