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Never Alone

Overwhelmed by emotion I squeeze in a tear Engulfed, consumed and drowning in fear. I close my eyes and kneel to the floor and just then I say to myself " stop you're not alone anymore". Just what are you doing, you silly cow? Don't you dare ask him when, where or how. He knows who you are and just what you need, doubt? oh no, don't ever plant that seed. Let go of the reigns and watch the clouds go by and sure sometimes it helps to cry but know this soon all tears will cease replaced but faith and belief just when you think you can take no more, guess what you've passed the test and he opens the door. Thankyou father!

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Skat A

Date: 1/22/2016 10:53:00 PM

CANDICE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**

Julian Hawkins

Date: 6/16/2015 9:16:00 PM

great work

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 5/28/2015 9:13:00 PM

Very eloquent write on God's grace and forgiveness, faith and life. I find your use of enjambment rather abrupt, though, and would suggest "but" being with the phrase " know this..." so it would read "But know this ..." and "you've" tied with the phrase -"passed the test" so it would read "you've passed the test." Enjambment is useful for poetic pause in thought, and cutting midway a phrase makes the word "hang" somewhat. Just an observation and constructive review.

Candice Pujadas
Date: 5/28/2015 9:54:00 PM

By the way you're totally right about the lines and I liked reading your poems also :)

Candice Pujadas
Date: 5/28/2015 9:32:00 PM

Thank you very much Cynthia. I must confess, my poetry is my diary and the lines that just seem to hang do so because I just can not seem to get them out fast enough. So I guess you could say they reflect the mood of the writer.