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Neptune Rising

The air perfumed with soggy hope
Once more my thoughts turn to you
That fine spring day we did elope
Neptune blushed a vivid blue
Releasing tulips, away we flew

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For: English Quintain a Spring Day Contest

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 11:30:00 PM
    Excellent! Great work, James! A lovely quintain! Very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Diggin' the love shown both in this poem, and for my stuff, Thx

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Great image.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 6:00:00 PM
    This write is so nicely playful! [so nice to hear from you in my news yet..but everyone is doing great keeping my mind off IT!} Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 3:16:00 PM
    The tulips make this spring poem. I love the use of mythology also - gives mystery. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 4:36:00 PM
    A rush of hope for the dream that would come true. Love the elope part, does away with so much fuss and gets the job done! Sweet verse Jimbo! :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:30:00 AM
    This is a beauty Jimbo, wishing you all the best for the contest as well :) Wilma

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:12:00 AM
    Very beautiful scent of Spring..So happy to be here enjoying your verse.. Charma :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 1:31:00 PM
    This dear poet, is a wonderful Quintain ! I love those terse writes that allows the reader to sit back and dream on of those moments in time which cause the bumps of love ! Awesome James ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 3:25:00 PM
    Happy quintain you wrote James. Good luck in the contest. Better work the word spring into it. She says you must. Thank you for your kind words. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 10:24:00 AM
    This is beautiful, James. Thank you for your sweet comments on my work. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim