Get Your Premium Membership

Nehru Pizza

Listen to poem:
It was a bigly time ago. I was rock and rolling. The guys wore gel or mop-top beads; The girls were cool strolling. Asking for her time, forthrightly, Permissions all obtained. A friendly double date, indeed, In stylish dress, constrained. Hands held, nervous knees, butterfly Bellies and Summer Sun. Zombie kids shuffling to their doom With cold-foot pizza fun. Names all changed to insure the past: Pete and Prue ate like hogs. Joe loved June with all of his heart -- Until the girls shrieked, "frogs!" Joe chased Pete around the table, Marinara splattered. Napkins called an encore order. June and Prue both flattered. Joe and Pete were at it, again. Girls with sticky-face smiles. We settled down and sauntered home. A night of teasing trials. Just before parting, Joe kissed June -- So ... unsymmetrical: He was cloud-sailing, upside down. June smelled boy chemical. July 14, 2016 Pink Domino - Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/30/2016 8:50:00 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
Login to Reply
Arnone Avatar
Tom Arnone
Date: 7/30/2016 10:46:00 AM
Happy you like it, Sara. :-)
Date: 7/30/2016 7:21:00 AM
What fun goings on! Loved the poem and the jollity therein. Congrats on your placement, Tom.~karam~
Login to Reply
Arnone Avatar
Tom Arnone
Date: 7/30/2016 10:47:00 AM
At the time period in question, Nehru shirts were all the rage.
Misra Avatar
Karam Misra
Date: 7/30/2016 7:22:00 AM
Nehru Pizza?
Date: 7/30/2016 12:37:00 AM
hah, love it. I remember such awkward days when hoping dates go well. good write/good read.
Login to Reply
Arnone Avatar
Tom Arnone
Date: 7/30/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thanks, Jesse. :-)
Date: 7/16/2016 7:22:00 AM
An enjoyably written recollection!
Login to Reply
Arnone Avatar
Tom Arnone
Date: 7/16/2016 9:03:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. P.S. I never said it was a recollection. ;-)
Date: 7/15/2016 9:26:00 AM
Syllable counts -- this one is 8686 -- curb creativity. I get their purpose -- I just find them annoying, stifling and time-consuming.
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2016 4:15:00 PM
I wrote 6,8,6,8 then found out I got it all wrongand had to re hash it lol congrats on your win Tom:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/14/2016 9:23:00 PM
Cute poem and very nostalgic! I love summertime poems.
Login to Reply
Arnone Avatar
Tom Arnone
Date: 7/14/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. :-)

Book: Shattered Sighs