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Need a Change

i wake up to go round and round in the circles your running around me the same things, days they never change waking up to repeat it all the same you repeat yourself, wording never changed same tone of voice, everything the same it's like you plan things to never change like some weird compulsory obsession because you never change and it gets me so frustrated the days too neat, too uncomplicated I want a challenge, I need a change you wonder why I get in a mood too bitter maybe even a little rude how many times that i have say i want a challenge, i need a change

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/20/2010 8:49:00 AM
Great write Crystal.....Larry
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:13:00 PM
interesting write, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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Date: 6/18/2010 2:59:00 PM
This is excellent. One must be able to express what is inside. I like the essence of this poem. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/18/2010 11:21:00 AM
Excellent description of being stuck in one of life's debilitating patterns. Great write.
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