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Nature's Games

Playing "Hide and Seek" Shadow hiding dawn till dusk Suns futile efforts

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James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2009 10:52:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Abe, a scene i would love to view>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/30/2009 3:00:00 PM

This just makes me happy to read!! I love the unusual way you have taken this picture and made it joyful ! ps (Thank you again, Abe, for the honor today!)

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/30/2009 1:10:00 PM

Its nice to see you again Abe with Your new haiku!Whereve you been?!True to the talent as alwais-->Loving the concept=)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/30/2009 12:41:00 PM

Great image of the sun poking through the scenery to leave its tracks on the earth. Very nice, Abe! Love, Carolyn

Date: 6/30/2009 12:12:00 PM

You've got me smiling with this one. It reminds me of childhood. Nice use of personification. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day! Karen